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Posting Superior Comments

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Posting Comments

 

Watch and learn from these students who give excellent tips for making comments.

A Tech Teacher currently based at an international school in Japan, has come up with a simple list of rules to remember when you make a comment on the wiki or VoiceThread.com. I have modified them slightly for clarity since she is an upper grades teacher. Please come back to the page if you are not sure about the quality of your comment.

I created some examples are in blue.

 

Ms. Kim Cofino says:

Good comments ...

  •    
  • are things you observe, but are not hurtful or negative;
  •  I learned that polar bears have black skin under their fur so they can absorb heat. 
  • are considerate of the author and the purpose of the post;
  • You convinced me to keep trying. I didn't realize you had to practice.  I just thought math came easily to you!  
  • include your own personal connections to what the author wrote;
  • I had the same thing happen to me, only I was lost in the Mall when I was two years old.  
  • answer a question, or add something new to the information posted;
  • Yes, I do think we should have longer recess.  Moving keeps you healthy.  
  • follow the writing process. Consider making a draft first. Comments are a published piece of writing so you may need to check your spelling and grammar to represent yourself well.

      It took me 10 minutes to write this comment because I kept thinking that you might not know what I mean unless I tell you face-to-face.  It seems I have to choose my words very carefully so you can really see my point. 

 

Checklist for Posting a Comment:

 

  • Is your comment specific?
  • Have you shared an idea or an opinion?
  • Di you grab the reader's attention?
  • Have you connected to a specific sentence of theme of the post? 
  • Were you successful in showing you understood the blog topic?
  • Did you maintain a positive tone?
  • Spelling, punctuation, and capitalization is correct

Modified version of:http://thereadingworkshop.wikispaces.com/Blog+Comment+Rubric 

 

Comments (33)

heather said

at 9:14 am on Sep 1, 2011

cool.

matthewk said

at 9:18 am on Sep 1, 2011

hey

eleanor said

at 9:15 am on Sep 1, 2011

no-one cares what you think

heather said

at 9:16 am on Sep 1, 2011

that is so mean Eleanor and you are on the posting comments page you know Mrs.Shields can see this

eleanor said

at 9:17 am on Sep 1, 2011

well, i don't care i'll just tell her that we were just being friendly that's all

eleanor said

at 9:18 am on Sep 1, 2011

well it's not my fault you post random comments

tommy said

at 9:18 am on Sep 1, 2011

hi

matthewk said

at 9:19 am on Sep 1, 2011

hey

eleanor said

at 9:19 am on Sep 1, 2011

stay out of our convo tommy

matthewk said

at 9:19 am on Sep 1, 2011

no

heather said

at 9:19 am on Sep 1, 2011

no we are not you are being soo mean and im telling on you Eleanor because you are posting mean com ments about someone and you watched that video in the class it said complement not be mean and say no one cares what yopu think

matthewk said

at 9:20 am on Sep 1, 2011

both of u shutup

heather said

at 9:20 am on Sep 1, 2011

typo*you

tommy said

at 9:20 am on Sep 1, 2011

yea wait am i even in this conversation

matthewk said

at 9:23 am on Sep 1, 2011

maybe

eleanor said

at 9:23 am on Sep 1, 2011

matthew, please out of this

heather said

at 9:20 am on Sep 1, 2011

Matthew don't listen to her

heather said

at 9:21 am on Sep 1, 2011

lmbooo Tommy

matthewk said

at 9:21 am on Sep 1, 2011

i know

sayanna said

at 9:22 am on Sep 1, 2011

Who are you talking to Zoie.

connor said

at 9:27 am on Sep 1, 2011

connor said

at 9:27 am on Sep 1, 2011

hi

eleanor said

at 9:30 am on Sep 1, 2011

hi conner, remember me, Eleanor

matthewk said

at 9:36 am on Sep 1, 2011

hey

sayanna said

at 9:35 am on Sep 1, 2011

hi

matthewk said

at 9:35 am on Sep 1, 2011

hi

matthewk said

at 9:35 am on Sep 1, 2011

hi

scott said

at 9:39 am on Sep 1, 2011

Hi guys! What are we chating about?

matthewk said

at 9:37 am on Sep 1, 2011

nothing

scott said

at 9:38 am on Sep 1, 2011

Who likes jokes?

matthewk said

at 9:39 am on Sep 1, 2011

see u later

scott said

at 9:40 am on Sep 1, 2011

Are we going to talk about something?

scott said

at 9:40 am on Sep 1, 2011

Bye!

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